It Takes 2 – More Persuasive, Sizzling Headlines – Part 2

In my last ‘It takes 2′ on persuasive headlines I mentioned how just by testing, people have increased their results by 1700% or more and in the PS. I will give you the link to my you tube video which provides you with the proof.

When headlines are so critical to your success, I want to give you an idea on what can be done with an existing headline after creating more persuasive and sizzling headlines to get more prospects and visitors reading your sales letters and sales copy.

I have a client, DR. Vince who wanted me to simply create persuasive headlines for him to test on his caveman cuisine section of his website. My pick of the headlines is one taken from a public domain book and it’s only 4 words. I have saved until last. No peaking now.

Here’s what his existing headline said:

“No More Diets”

Subhead:

Stop the Confusion!
Eat all you want and Lose Weight following the Lost Secrets of the Caveman

After reading his website copy, here’s what I came up with for Dr. Vince to test. I also said for him to play with what I have written too.

“Lose Weight WITHOUT Dieting”

“Stops Diets – Lose Weight”

“How To Look Good Naked”

“How To Look Good Naked Without Dieting Ever Again”

“How To Look Good Naked – NEVER Diet Again”

“How To Look Good Naked – Eating As Much As YOU Want To – Never Diet Again”

“Puts Weight Loss On Auto-Pilot While YOU Eat As Much As YOU Want Without Being On A Diet”

“Puts Weight Loss On Auto-Pilot”

“Puts Weight Loss On Auto-Pilot Without Dieting”

“Puts Weight Loss On Auto-Pilot Without YOU Dieting Ever Again”

“Puts Dieting On Hold While YOU Lose Weight”

“Puts Dieting On Hold While YOU Lose Weight – Never Diet Again”

“Diet Free Weight Loss Secrets”

“Makes Weight Loss Easy”

“Makes Weight Loss Easy Without Dieting”

“How To Lose Weight, Eat As Much As YOU Want . . . Without Being On A Diet”

“At Last . . . The Lazy Way To Weight Loss Success”

“The Lazy Way To Weight Loss Success”

“The Lazy Man’s Way To Weight Loss Success”

“The Lazy Woman’s Way To Weight Loss Success”

“They All Laughed When I Started on Dr. Vince’s Controversial Caveman Cuisine . . . Until I Lost So Much Weight My Friends Didn’t Recognize Me”

“They All Laughed When I Started on Dr. Vince’s Caveman Cuisine . . . Until I Lost So Much Weight My Friends Didn’t Recognize Me”

“They All Laughed When I Started on Dr. Vince’s Controversial Caveman Cuisine . . . Until I Lost So Much Weight Eating As Much As I Wanted – Without Going On A Diet”

“They All Laughed When I Started on Dr. Vince’s Caveman Cuisine . . . Until I Lost So Much Weight Eating As Much As I Wanted – Without Going On A Diet”

“How To Eat More, Lose Weight, Stop Dieting And Feel Great”

“How To Eat More, Lose Weight, Stop Dieting Look Good Naked And Feel Great”

“Women’s Weight Loss Secrets Without A Diet Revealed”

“Men’s Weight Loss Secrets Without A Diet Revealed”

“Diet FREE Weight Loss Secrets Revealed”

“Long Lost Caveman Cuisine Makes YOU Lose Weight Without Dieting”

“YOU Too Can Lose Weight, Leave YOUR Love Handles Behind, Say Goodbye To YOUR Blubber Bundles . . . Eat As Much As YOU Want Without A Diet”

SUBHEAD:

Stops the Confusion!

Eat all you want and Lose Weight following the Long Lost Secrets of the Caveman

Notice, I only added one single letter to the first word of his subhead. I added and ‘S’ to Stop which when it reads Stops it implies the benefit is already done for you. With the headlines written, DR. Vince can use some of these as a subhead.

Here’s my favorite headline:

“Eat and Grow Thin”

Does that remind you of the famous book title by Napoleon Hill - “Think and Grow Rich”?

Read them, see how I have added words here and there, combined headlines etc. This is exactly why you need to be writing 50 plus headlines because YOU will create a gem of a headline, maybe several, that are so powerful, persuasive and sizzling mixed with the right balance of curiosity that explodes your sales and profits. Can you take these headlines and model them for your product or services?

YES you can.

When you are ready to create persuasive and sizzling headlines as well as your sale copy, then you need my copywriting blueprint formula. Go to:

http://www.magicwordssell.com

“Dedicated to Kicking YOUR Ass Until YOU Succeed!”

Warmly

Trevor ‘Toe Cracker’ Crook

PS. To see my the actual persuasive headline that increase response by a whopping 1700% – go to:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IO1adJvZneA

PPS. To check out Dr. Vince’s caveman cuisine – go to his site and click on the Caveman Club link. I recommend you subscribe to his newsletters too.

http://www.drvinceonline.com

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